A New Story of the Great Wall
Chak Lung Ho, Group 2: Fiction, Ying Wa Primary School
owadays, everyone can see the Great Wall. People think that it was built for the King of Qin. I
believed it until the day I visited the Great Wall. A special light and the tiny pictures showed me the
REAL history of it. Ladies and Gentlemen, here comes the real story.
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It happened in the period of the Three Kingdoms. Adrian, an alien who came from a planet called
us and looked like a human, was very smart. Vertus was out of water, and the ruler there ordered
r people to go to different planets to find water. Adrian was the lucky one who was sent to the
earth and he went to China.
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At that time, China was a messy country with the hostile empire- HK Empire, led by LiuBei and Beijing
Empire, led by CaoCao. They both wanted to unify and rule China, and they always fought against each other.
Adrian landed at northern Beijing before he first met an ugly villager, Chan. He was amazed by Adrian’s
sudden appearance. ‘Maybe he is a supernatural being,’ he thought. Hence, he communicated with Adrian by
drawing pictures on the rocks. Then he brought Adrian to his village. Chan’s neighbour also thought that Adrian
was a supernatural, so they treated him very well. He then used pictures to tell them that his planet had
high-technology. Chan thought that Adrian could help CaoCao (the empire of Beijing) with high-tech, so he
reported this to CaoCao. He then asked Adrian to see him.
In the palace, Adrian said that he could help CaoCao, and he had to go back to Vertus and take the high-tech
for CaoCao, but he couldn’t remember the location of Beijing, so he wanted CaoCao to build a Great Wall so
that he could see where Beijing was. Hence, CaoCao forced his villagers to build it, and Adrian left.
Unfortunately, LiuBei knew this and he wanted to build it in HK.
There wasn’t enough materials in HK, so LiuBei wanted to get them from Beijing. LuiBei ordered the
captain of his soldiers, GuanYu, to lead his soldiers to get materials in Beijing.
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Charge! Kill” Although GuanYu’s army was powerful, they were beaten by the stronger soldiers and
villagers in Beijing.
Billions of people had been injured or killed in this age of war. Later, LiuBei, the empire of HK, asked all
the Hongkongers to go to Beijing to fight against CaoCao with their fishing knives and fishing nets. CaoCao’s
people haven’t seen them before, so they were terrified. At last, the Hongkongers won the battle with only
GuanYu and some people left. Unluckily, they discovered that all the materials for building the Great Wall had
been destroyed during the war! They were afraid that LuiBei would be very mad after knowing about this bad
news, so they stayed there.
Adrian saw all these in his “High-technoscope” while he was traveling in space. He was surprised and he
thought, “This is my chance to take over the water and place for my planet.” Immediately he called his friends
in Vertus. Then, they went to Beijing where were only a few people alive after the war.
The Vertus people wore clothes like the dead people, pretended to be the human beings. They killed the
adults in Beijing and just let the children go when Adrian saw Chan. Thanking Chan for treating him very well,
Adrian let Chan to be in his group. Therefore, no one except Chan knew about this.
Adrian built the Great Wall in a second with his high-tech. Then, he called all Vertus people to come to
Beijing and enjoyed the water there.
One night, Chan used a stone to draw this on the Great Wall secretly when the other aliens were sleeping.
After some time, they found that the air and the water there weren’t suitable for them to use, so they left the
earth and found water in other planets. The Vertus people finally disappeared.
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