Princess Saviour
Chi Yin Chow, Group 2: Fiction, Ying Wa Primary School
n ancient China, after the Great Wall was built, there were a lot of wars. So, the Great Wall was broken into
two sides. On one side, there was a place which was full of happiness because the people lived there was
very kind and friendly. So the residents named it as Amazingland. It was owned by the Chinese army. On
the other side of the Great Wall, there was a place which was full of despair and was hopeless. So they
named it as Scaryland. Many wizards and magicians lived there. The most evil wizard was an old man
called ABC, and he (ABC) hated Amazingland.
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One day, ABC cast a spell. It could produce a flying mat and he wanted to use it to travel to Amazingland.
Upon arrival, he changed into a young man. He built a “house” there. But ABC put a lot of evil things inside.
For example, magic monkey and magic box, etc.
After he got all the things ready, he came to the king’s castle. He told the king, “I hide a lot of gold and
treasure at my home and I wanted to give all of them to you!” The king wasn’t very smart. He thought that it
was real so he wanted to take the treasure. But he thought his daughter liked treasure more than him, so he told
his daughter to follow ABC to his “home”.
When they arrived, ABC brought the princess into his “house”. When the princess stepped into his “house”,
a big cave fell on top of her and the magic box made her stunned.
That night, the king was very worried because his daughter didn’t come home. Suddenly, a piece of paper
was blown into the castle by the strong wind. According to the note, the king needed to pay
$10,000,000,000,000,000 to ABC in a month. Otherwise, he will kill the princes. According to the rules of
Amazingland, if the princess or the prince was dead, the king must be killed by a lion. The king was worried
because he couldn't afford to pay this huge ransom and asked Pat to rescue the princess at once. If he couldn't
save the princess, the king will cut his head off. But if he succeed, he could marry the princess and be the king
of Amazingland.
The next day, Pat started his journey to Scaryland. He rode on his magic mat and flew to ABC’s house.
However, when he arrived, he found nothing there but a box. He used a magic flashlight to open it. There was a
letter inside that said, “If you wanted to safe the princess, come to the dragon kingdom in Scaryland. Remember,
the dragon kingdom in Scaryland!” After he read the letter it turned into some smoke and disappeared. Then, he
continued riding his magic mat to Scaryland.
But on his journey, he saw a lot of robot soldier who worked for ABC chasing him! He used his magic
sword to fight against them. Although he killed all the robot soldiers, he hurt his arm. So, he hid under a tree and
took a rest. He started to find the magic fruit, which could cure any wound. Suddenly, he saw something
sparkling. He dashed towards it to have a look. Wow! There was a lot of magic fruit. He ate one and his was
cured. He picked a lot of them and put some into his pockets. After he took a rest, he started his journey again.
Then, he changed himself into a dragon so he could get inside the Kingdom. After that, he flew to the Dragon
Kingdom quickly.
When he entered the kingdom, no one seems to know he wasn’t a real dragon. He worked as a guard to
protect the territory which locked the princess. You may ask why no one in the main world bothered them at all.
It was because no one would like to enter a broken district which will fall apart any time. But to Pat and his
fellows, their places were wonderful, and unbreakable. It was because of magic.
Pat ran out of the bedroom that night. He ran to the tower which locked the princess. When the dragon
soldier asked him, he said, “I……I am the…… the one that Dragon…… king told me to see…… um…… the
princess escaped!” He suddenly pointed to the right. The dragon soldiers looked up as Pat cast a magic spell. So
they fell asleep at once! “Wow! How stupid! ”said Pat. Then he ran into the tower quickly.
After he saw the princess, he changed to his original form quickly and told her not to make any noise. He
changed to a dragon again and took her away. Then, ABC appeared. He fought with Pat. After a while, Pat hurt
his head and he was very painful. Suddenly, he remembered the magic fruit! He ate all of it and got a lot of
magic power. He killed ABC and left very quickly. Then, he used a very powerful magic spell to destroyed
Scaryland.
After he came back to Amazingland, the princess married Pat and they lived happily ever after. At last, the
Chinese army with the help of Pat and his fellows, beat their enemies and China was peaceful again. And Pat
repaired the Great Wall and it will protect China, even the world, forever.
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