New Tale of the Great Wall
Albert Yeung, Group 2, Fiction, St. Bonaventure Catholic Primary School
nce upon a time, in an exotic faraway land, there was a great king called King Qing. He was an honest
and trusting man and he never hated anyone in his country. As a result of his kindness, many people
worshipped and trusted him.
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One day, a man called Ryan led his army to fight against King because Ryan wanted to be the
g of the country. When God saw this he was unhappy and decided to build a Great Wall to defend
the country. He appeared in front of the King and said, ‘Qing, to keep your country safe, I will build you a Great
Wall.’ Then he waved his magic wand. The Great Wall appeared!
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King Qing was happy and ordered the army to fight against Ryan’s army.
A Fierce Fighting
Then the Qing’s army went on the Great Wall, the battle started. ‘Go! Destroy them!’ Ryan roared. When
Ryan’s army came, King’s army was ready to defend the country. Qing’s soldiers shot dangerous fire arrows,
Ryan’s threw deadly boomerangs. They were matching each other in strength.
After a long and gruesome battle, all that remained of Ryan’s army were ten soldiers but in Qing’s army still
had over a hundred soldiers. Ryan’s men were scared and they ran away. ‘Hurray!’ The soldiers said, overjoyed
with the victory and they all hugged each other. Qing also felt happy because he could scare his foe away. The
country was in peace again!
A problem
After Qing won the war, every country heard about that and wanted to rob the Great Wall because they
believed the Great Wall could keep their country safe. Then, the Kings from all countries held a conference. ‘I
want to own a great wall!’ said King Andy.
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Lets us team up and take their Great Wall!’
King Joe said, “Good idea! Let’s team up and work together tomorrow!” All the Kings set up an alliance, and
Qing didn’t have a clue what was happening.
At night, Qing had a nightmare about many people coming to his country and stealing his Great Wall. He
was afraid and ordered the army to go on the Great Wall and stand guard.
In the morning, the army saw some flags behind the Great Wall. Horses whinnied and ran fast. ‘The
enemies are round the corner! The numbers were more times than our army!’ yelled a scared soldier.
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The whole country will be annihilated!’ All the soldiers cried and they didn’t know what to do. Suddenly, God
appeared and used his power to kill some of the enemies. He declared loudly.
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My soldiers, come and fight with your families.’ The soldiers stood up and fight. On the way, the Great Wall
was destroyed by the army. The soldier fought bravely, killed and killed. At last they won the battle and saved
their country and families. The soldiers said thanks to God and he went up to the sky.
Happy times
After this war, the soldiers went back to the palace and told King Qing about the battle. The king was very
happy because his army was victorious. The soldiers on the other army built their own Great Wall because they
wanted to let the God see that they didn’t need his power again. After this, the country was safe and in peace.
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