Tony’s Adventure
Yuen Shun Ho, Group 2: Fiction, HKTA Shun Yeung Primary School
nce upon a time, there was a boy named Tony. He was a genius at science but he was not very popular.
He is eighteen years old. His classmates often talk about their boyfriends and girl friends. He does not
like this because he doesn’t have a girl friend.
love
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One day, he had a crazy idea, “If I go to the future, maybe I will be famous and lots of girls will
me.” He spent a lot of days making a time machine with ideas from the internet. He thought,
ch year should I go to? Where should I go?”
He chose his lucky number in years, which was 2555. He sat in the time machine and went to the Great
Wall of China in 2555.
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Bang! He was at the Great Wall of China. “It is very hot! Why are there not any people? Where are
they?” There were so many questions in his brain.
Suddenly, he heard a noise. A girl came out from a tunnel in the ground. “It is dangerous here! Come
with me now!” said the girl. “What! Who are you?” asked Tony. Then they went to the girl’s house under the
ground. Tony asked, “Who are you? Why is it so dangerous here?”
The girl said, “My name is Pam. Why don’t you know what’s going on?” Tony replied, “I came here in a
time machine from 2013. What happened?” Pam said, “It’s 2555 now and aliens have conquered our world.
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What!” shouted Tony.
“
In 2540, people went to different planets. At the same time, the aliens wanted to find another planet to
live on. They found our planet and they attacked us. Lots of people have died. I am lucky. Why did you come
here?” asked Pam.
“
I thought in the future, the people will love me but it is not true.” said Tony. “Err…maybe not, but you
should go back to 2013. It is too dangerous here.” said Pam. “I have one more question.” said Tony, “Why are
you on the Great Wall of China?”
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My friends and I want to fight against the aliens and the wall can protect us.” said Pam.
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I can help fight them.” said Tony.
Pam and Tony were walking to the Great Wall and suddenly the sky turned black and Pam said
something to Tony.
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Let’s go! The aliens are coming!” she said, “If they catch us, they will kill us!”
They quickly walked into a cave and down to the basement. In the basement, there were lots of strange
machines. “What’s that?” asked Tony after he pointed to a machine which looked like a bear. “Oh! That is a
secret.” said Pam, “I will tell you later.”
When the sky turned back to normal, they walked out from the basement. Pam had some things to do, so
she went home. Tony decided to walk around and explore. He didn’t see the alien coming and he was caught.
The alien said, “Who are you and where do you come from?” “I will not tell you!” said Tony.
The alien thought, “What should I do? How can I make him tell me what the humans are doing? Oh! I
can change myself into a human.”
The alien ran into a room and turned himself into Pam. The alien ran back out of the room and asked,
“
Where am I? I was caught by the aliens and I don’t remember.” Tony saw the alien and believed it was Pam.
“
Pam, Pam! Do you remember me? I am Tony.”
Pam and Tony worked together and escaped from the alien’s room. Tony took Pam back to her cave. Just
then, Pam changed back into the alien.
“
I caught you, you stupid person!” said the alien, “You! Go into the room and tell Pam if she wants to
rescue you, she must give up.”
Bang! Bang! “Pam, Pam” Tony said “If you want to rescue me, you have to give up.”
Pam did not give up and she decided to fight the alien. For the next few days, in the Great Wall of China,
the people fought with the aliens. It was a big fight. At the start, the aliens killed a lot of people, but the people
did not give up. Finally, the people won the war and they saved Tony from the dangers.
“
You need to go back to your time.” said Pam. “But I forget where my time machine is.” answered Tony.
Pam helped Tony to find his time machine. They fell in love. One day, Tony asked Pam to marry him because
he loved her. Pam said, “Of course not. You come from the past, we can’t marry!”
Tony was so sad. “But we can still be friends can’t we?” he said.
A few days later, Tony used the time machine and went back to his time. Before he went, he said, “I love
you Pam, if I could, I would marry you.”
Tony went to his time and when he grew up, he became a famous scientist.
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