AMythical War on the Great Wall
Chun Hei Lee, Group 2: Fiction, Ying Wa Primary School
tarted by the first Emperor of China, Qin Shi Huang, and rebuilt in the Ming Dynasty, the Great Wall
stretched from Shanhaiguan in the east, to Lop Lake in the west of China as the critical military
defensive barrier of China throughout thousands of years. As a country rich in unlimited natural
resources, China had long been a target of many nomadic tribes and even countries far in Europe which
would like to invade and take over its wealth.
The Greek army was one of the greedy invaders. The violent fight between the Greek army and the
Chinese army in the period of Ming Dynasty made a critical change to the structure of the Great Wall, helping to
protect the Empire of China. It all began at the chilling fight over Shanhaiguan on the Great Wall at a howling
windy night under the dim moonlight.
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The wind howled. Evan, a Greek warrior who led his troops trying to conquer territories of Chinese empire,
swiped his sword Damagear at the Chinese enemy. However, they blocked the strike in advance. There were too
many fighters from the Chinese army! He pulled out his bow, fired a few shots, and retreated back into the
darkness.
Back at Lop Lake, the wounded drank Theteus, a godly silver drink which was to heal Ruzlus, a deadly
poison of the Chinese. Evan slumped over to a bunk, exhausted of the fighting today. His legs ached. Holding
his breath in the chilly dark, Evan knew clearly that the taking over of the gateway Shanhaiguan signified the
victory of the battle. He knew they were not the only army fighting to the death. Above him, the sky crackled
with green colours. Lightning flashed. Evan knew immediately what it meant. Their God was fighting for them.
The God of the Air, Apollo was battling the Jade Emperor, the Chinese God. The Jade Emperor was as powerful
as Apollo. The Jade Emperor was also immortal. The Greeks won and took over all the world, except China. The
Greeks were skilled in fighting, but they had been fighting a losing battle. The Chinese army had outnumbered
them. They had a million fighters, but the Greeks had only three to four thousand of fighters. They had lost a
hundred fighters already, but they still insisted on making an attack as they wanted to take over the world even
though they had not enough warriors. They charged at the Chinese camp, ignoring the facts that they were not
powerful enough.
Evan slashed, swiped and stabbed his sword, soldiers of the Chinese army fell and fell, but more just took
their place. More and more Greek soldiers fell in blood. The Great Wall had become a bloody river. To defend
the Greek warriors from the attack of Chinese army, Evan raised a shimmering core of energy, the core of the
Greeks. He knew that if the core was destroyed, the whole Greek army would just disappear from the earth.
However, this was the only way to save his Greek army. Without a second thought, Evan raised the core. Evan
shouted, 'Full automation maxima!' Instantly, a wall of force shimmered in front of them, cutting off the Chinese
and the Greeks. Just then, a Chinese soldier cast a spell on Evan. Instantly, thick, dark mist got into Evan's eyes
and wrapped around him.
When Evan opened his eyes, he was confused why he was on a shimmering line along the Great wall with
thousands of soldiers yelling and heaps of dead bodies lying aside the wall. Suddenly, Positievian appeared
before him. Immediately, Evan leapt on his CT1220 Sonic hyper-bike, and revved the engines, dust trailing after
his bike, following Positievian, son of Apollo. Evan’s eyes gleamed with a bloody red colour. He was being
controlled by the Chinese spell! He had forgotten his identity-- the militant leader of the Greek army.! What was
in his mind was just killing Positievian to stop the bleeding battle. He knew he had to do it fast as Apollo would
come to save his son. When Apollo left the fight to save his son, the Chinese would win.
Positievian sensed Evan's weird act. He reinforced the air, ripping the oxygen out of the mist surrounding
them, materialized a pearly white wall of mist. Evan pounded the wall of mist. Then, Positievian shouted a spell
in Ancient Greek language, “O’beteristei, heifemisetei!” White mist wrapped around Evan, waking him from the
Chinese spell. Once he was woken, he became stronger and returned to the battlefield in Shanhaiguan
immediately.
Evan raced back to the battlefield, summoning wind spirits to blow away Chinese soldiers, lighting to flash
on Chinese soldiers burning them to a crisp and killing them. All Greek army took the chance to push forward
against the Chinese camp. Suddenly, Chinese archers on the Great Wall fired. They had stepped in a trap! Evan
tried to summon a huge twister, but he was too weak to do so, because he was still recovering from the spell of
the Chinese and drawing his sword stabbing the Chinese beast, Lycredo Fangrider. Once the beast burst into red
smoke, the Greek archers shot arrows at the Chinese.
Evan shouted, 'Battle mode!' Thick, black steel wrapped around Evan's arms. He punched a rock, sending it
flying into the Chinese core which was heavily and secretly guarded in tower on Shanhaiguan. By mistake, the
Chinese core rose and smacked into the Greek core, sending a brilliant flash of white light covering them. Soon,
everyone evaporated. Only the mighty Great Wall stood proudly on the mountains. The Great Wall became
harder with bricks and stone instead of rammed earth after the war.