Angel and the Prince
Chin Tze Wong, Group 2: Fiction, HKTA Shun Yeung Primary School
long time ago, there was a young girl called Angel. She was beautiful but poor. This girl lived in a
kingdom. When she was a little girl, she met a prince. His name was Arthur. When they grew up, they
became engaged. After a few weeks, Angel got into the castle with the prince. They loved each other
but they couldn’t marry because the law of the kingdom said the prince must marry a princess. So,
they ran out of the kingdom and tried to find another kingdom where no one knew them.
They walked a long way and finally they found a village near the Great Wall of China. They
thought the people in this kingdom had come from China because they didn’t speak the language.
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They settled down and found a place to live. One day prince Arthur saw a guard of their kingdom. The
king sent them to find the prince and Angel. Arthur said to Angel, “Dear, there is a guard who is looking for
me, run as fast as you can, don’t let the guard find you!” He pushed Angel out of the back door.
Angel wanted to open the door again but it was locked, so she just ran and ran and ran to the Great Wall.
She was sad because she knew Arthur was taken back to their kingdom with the guard. She cried a lot until
there was no more to cry for. She thought, “I must help Arthur, I can’t let him marry the princess!” So she
went back to the house and packed some things that she needed. She set off to save the prince.
When she went back to the kingdom, the guards didn’t let her back to the kingdom because the king
ordered them not to let her in. Then, Angel went back to the Great Wall because the city was full of guards.
After two years, there was news which made Angel excited. It was that prince Arthur escaped from the
castle, but he didn’t come to the Great Wall, he went to England.
A few more years later, it was 1512. The people said it was the year the world would end. Angel thought,
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Oh! It will be the end of the world, but I can’t see Arthur, I hope I can see him before the last day of the
world.”
Very far away, Arthur also thought the same thing and he thought, “Maybe Angel is waiting for me at the
Great Wall of China. I can go there on the last day so the guards won’t catch me and I can die with Angel.
That night, they dreamt the same thing. They met at the Great Wall at the end of the earth. After that
time they didn’t die, the Great Wall saves them and the other people. Suddenly they moved to another planet
and lived happily ever after.
Arthur went back to the Great Wall and met Angel. When they saw each other, they quickly ran to each
other and gave a big kiss. At that time the great wall was shining. When the shining stopped, they and the
other people were standing on a beach and everyone was confused.
Angel and Arthur were shocked and they shouted at the same time, “Oh! The dream is true!” Other
people didn’t know what was going on and just stood there waiting for someone to tell them what had
happened.
Suddenly, Arthur thought, “Our god left me and Angel and other people so that means that god wanted
me to be their king!” Then Arthur told them what they are going to do. They built a wall to save the city and
built a house for living.
Later, they made some transport and made some clothes. A few years later, the people were living their
usual lives.
Of course, Angel and Arthur got married and a few more years later, they had a girl and a boy.
When they grew up, the princess loved a poor man and the prince loved a poor girl. When Angel and
Arthur saw them, they thought they were doing exactly what they did when they were young. But Arthur is a
good father, he didn’t stop them and let them marry and build their city.
100
years later, the planet is full of cities, but they never fight, so the planet is peaceful and the people
love one another.
Because the cities never fight, the planet will be saved forever.
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