The Great Great Wall
Matthew Cheng, Group 2: Fiction, Bonham Road Government Primary School
nce upon a time, the king of China Brian loved his citizen very much. He held different events during
the year, like celebrating different festivals so that the people can enjoy joys of the peaceful. Besides,
the citizen enjoyed living in the beautiful scenery, like the forests, lovely flowers. The people were
glad to be the citizen of China.
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There was a little boy named Ben. He was a good boy. He loved his family very much, and
yed the time with his parents and the little sister. Moreover, he taught his sisters with the
knowledge that she did not know.
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Ben made a lot of new friends in the school. He studied hard therefore he got good results in all the
subjects. He asked questions to clarify areas that he did not know. In addition, Ben is good at basketball; he
won a lot of medals in different competitions. He was outgoing and hardworking boy. He was also polite and
friendly.
Ben helped people too. He took part in charity works, like visiting orphans and elderly home to deliver his
cares. He also donated food, toys and clothes to the poor families and those who needed helps. Besides, Ben
helped the parents at home as well, like sweeping the floor, cleaning the clothes and the house to reduce his
mother workload. Lastly, he helped his classmates with their homework.
However, the peaceful live was disrupted by the invasion of the neighborhood country. The enemies were
very cruel; they treat brutally to the China citizen. They took wealth out of the citizen homes, some citizen were
killed as well. A lot the people lost their homes and family members. Ben felt very angry and sad because
some of the dead people were his friends and his friends’ parents.
King Brian was very sad and concern on the miserable situation that the country was facing. He wanted to
protect the country and his citizen, therefore he asked the citizen to come together and fight for the country.
Ben’s father was one of the citizens that had joined the army too. Ben was very worried of father; he reminded
his father to take care of himself and asked his father to come home soon.
Ben wanted to do something to help. He recalled he heard of the fairy that lived in a high mountain
that was very far away, was very powerful. He believed the fairy can save his father, as well as the country. He
wanted the country to back to the peaceful like the old day so that everyone can live happily in the country.
The next day, Ben started the long journey to find the fairy. He walked and walked and was very tired. On
the way, he passed a rough river. Because Ben was very tired, he fell into the river accidentally. He was scared,
but he knew that he cannot give up. He swan and swan with his last strength. Eventually, Ben was able to swan
back to the river band. He was safe but his arm and his leg were hurt, and he was exhausted.
Ben thought of his father and the country, he gathered his strength to start the journey again. He continued
to walk and walk, and then he came to a big forest. A big lion block his way. Ben was frightened, but he knew
cannot give up. He begged the lion not to eat him because he needed to find the fairy to save his father and the
county. The lion was moved by Ben’s reasoning and so the lion let him go.
Ben continued his journey; he arrived at the big mountain. The mountain was high and rocky. It was very
difficult to claim up to the mountain. He was very tired and wanted to give up. However, he thought of his
father and he knew he had to continue to climb up the mountain to look for the fairy. Finally, he arrived at the
top of the tall mountain. He was exhausted but he was happy because he knew he was very close to the fairy
house.
After Ben took some rest, he started to look for the fairy house. Suddenly, he saw some light through the
forest. It was the fairy house! Ben found the fairy finally.
Ben knocked on the door; the fairy opened the door and asked, “What can I do for you, Ben?”
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My father and the country are in trouble, I need your help to save my father and the country”, said Ben.
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I will help you because you are a good boy! You always help other with problems. Tell me what has
happened”, said the fairy
“
My father is fighting with the emery to protect the country, he is in danger. I hope you can help to save
my father and the country”, said Ben
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I will send a dragon to help fighting with the enemy and protect the country. You can ride on the dragon”,
said the fairy.
The dragon was long and it was red in color with black spots on the body. It was strong and brave too. Ben
rode on the dragon and went to the battle field. The dragon fight bravely against the enemy, it opened the mouth
and fire came out. A lot of the enemy was killed; the rest ran away quickly and eventually all enemy were out
of the China. The dragon laid down, soon it became the Great Wall that protected the country from the enemy.
King Brian and the people were very happy. Everyone celebrated the win with joys. After that, all of the
people enjoyed the normal peaceful living again.