Great Wall
Jimmy Ho Yan Ngai, Group 2: Fiction, Bonham Road Government Primary School
n a Sunny day, I read a book about the Great Wall. I think it was very funny. I wanted to travel to the
ancient time and saw what the initial appearance of the Great Wall was. As I am an engineer, I could
build it by myself. I was very confused. What materials did I need to buy? Did I need to buy the
engine? Should I build a spaceship… a lot of question came up my mind.
I saw a book in my bookshelf. I picked it up. It’s about a hypnotist. The hypnotist used a clock to
hypnotize people. The people will then sleep and do the thing what he says. I took action. Then I bought a clock.
I prepared a light, some switches, an engine, some gear, a bell and years. Day by day, I made my time machine. I
was very happy. I couldn’t wait to test it to see whether it worked or not. I chose the 214 B.C. to watch how the
people built the Great Wall.
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I sat on the sofa and manipulated my time machine. When the clock rang, I went to the ‘Time Subway’.
After a few seconds, I went to the Great Wall. I thought there were wars between the seven countries, the wall
was very dilapidated. The emperor of Oin in order to consolidated the north line of defense connecting the old
wall. Oin Shi Huang used a lot of people to help him to build. They need to move the heavy bricks to the hill.
However, they have a little food to eat and a little water to drink.
The measurement was bad. When I looked around, some soldiers were running after me. I hid behind the
cart. And I went back to home. I thought what I could help them. I was walking around the home when I saw a
toy bulldozer. I went to there again and with the bulldozer. It was very convenient. It helped them very much.
But the old days it does not have oil and the soldiers were very curiosity. They think it will attack then so they
broke it.
This idea does not work so I started to think the other ideas. After a few minutes, I think I can build some
robot didn’t need energy to move it. The principle is like winding watch. When you on chair, it will move for a
one day. I went back to there with my robot. It is very useful but it very easy to break and it is hard to carry. I
think the Great Wall in Oin Dynasty doesn’t magnificent, it was disabled awful. Many people died during the
build so I won’t travel to there again. I went to the second dynasty. It is Hang. When I went to Hang, I didn’t see
anybody ever in beacon. It was very strange. Then I heard some body was shouting and beat the drums Behind
the hill I saw an army. In the Great Wall I saw an army too. I was very scared so I ran very fast to the
Yumengnan. That two were fighting with each other. I needed to go lack to my home. I looked up the history
look. Oh! The Hand was having wars with Hun. Therefore, I didn’t go the Hang Great Wall again.
The next dynasty is Tang Dynasty. In that dynasty, the Great Wall was very magnificent and did have any
wars. There were many people come from different countries. They paid tribute to the Emperor of Tang. They
called him Tian Kehan. It means the castles of the world. I was walking and I saw a red diamond but I didn’t
care about it. I was hungry so I went back to home, but it didn’t work. Oh! It didn’t have enough energy. I was
very scared. A few minutes later, the sky turned black. It rained heavily. A saw a hole and I walked in it. I went
back to my home. Then after some research, in the Great Wall, that a space-time. It makes people worry because
when the people pass here, they will transport to modern. Then most serious is if the crack grows, all the things
will sucked into the crack and the two times and space will crash. The legend told a key could close it and the
key by an arum to watch. I wanted to find where the keep was and I went to the look shop quickly and found
five different maps and bought it.
I looked up the map but I didn’t have idea where did the key in. I opened the TV and watched the news.
The reporter said “In Great Wall, that’s a people disappears, the people said they saw a hole.” That a bad news. I
ran to the library and looked the old looks about Great Wall. A book mentions about the key and the door had a
red diamond. Oh I saw it when I was in the Tary dynasty. I picked up some simple luggage, settled of my long
journey. I went to the Great Wall and find where the red diamond was. I found it and pick it up. I opened the
door. I walked in it and I fell into a long slide.
It was very long. This hob was very deer. After an hour, I went to the end. I walked it. There were a lot of
pictures. They are the arum and lion. After a minute, I saw the key. It was very special. It had a dragon and a
hole on it. I ran to it. Suddenly, the wall moved, the picture became a real. They have about a million people,
they ware black clothes behind then that a big lion. It lasted for about ten minutes. I wanted to escape, they ran
after me. I ran to the Great Wall and sudden it became a big dragon and the beacon ran a lot of soldier. They
wear white clothes. It was a magic. We went to the door and fright with the lion and the soldier who worn black
clothes. After a few hours, we lost. I saw a hole on the dragon head. I used a red diamond to put in it. The
dragon moved. They did soldier recovered. They were more powerful than the past. Easily, we killed the evils. I
get the key and I went to close the hole, sudden it broke. I was very disappointed. The key became some sand. I
lay on the floor -- the sand spiral. It became bigger and bigger. It went to the hole and the hole closed. The
dragon became the Great Wall again every things like a dream. I looked at the newspaper and nobody talked